Its missing a solid bassline. There's that flanger synth but it's not solid, it pans around a little too much, it needs a steady bassline to bring it together.
Like the guy said below me, this is more of an industrial song.
Has a really nice beat to it. Somethings missing but I cant quite put my finger on it.
Keep up the good work!
Yeah, I see that now.. ^_^' Thank you for the support, Looks like you revived the songs score, If you could vote on Impulse 101, ^_^'