the guitar in the beginning was too growly in contrast to the crisp synth part in my oppinnon. Maybe raise it an octave or change patches and see if that works. The orchestral part after the intro i liked. You did a nice job linking the two parts together/ The drums could use some work. THrown in some hi hats and some snares. The synth part really tied the song together nicely. I was very impressed with this song. It is really my cup of tea when it comes to making songs, the flow and choice of chord progressions was very nice. However, the string parts and all of the overlying melodies basicaly raped all of my works i have ever done. The guitar is desperatly in need of change though/ can tell you worked hard....good job
Hey, thanks for the review. I definitely agree with the synth guitar thing. It actually went thru two changes before I settled on what it is now. I've been struggling for an understanding of drums ever since I started writing stuff too. Thanks for the criticism, I really appreciate it.