It's nice, it sounds good, just needs some more diversity.
I'm not that much of a trance fan, so you know, but I think you have a lot of talent.
I don't know how you spend your time, but seeing you submit a song almost every day or two on average, you don't spend a lot of time on one song, OR you don't do much except makig songs.
And I'm implicating you're lifeless or anything (please don't take this personal), but I think that, if you just would step away from your songs now and then, you can look at them again another time with a different view and be more objective so you can improve the songs.
I hope I made the review I intended to make.
Hope to hear more from you ;)
(BTW: Just noticed someone voted zero ¬_¬, the bastard)
actually.... as weird as it may seem to you, a old not as good version of this song was my second song i submitted, and it made song of the week....
i KNOW its repetitive, and im not gonna shorten it down to like 30 seconds just so you dont have to listen to it all, it has more parts to it then it seems, but it is the same melody, i KNOW it gets repetitive, but taking all those elements away and adding new ones would totally change the song from what i wanted it.
you think this is bad, go check out the "best electronica artists" on soundclick, there are people on there who have 9 minute long songs that use the same melody through the whole song....
plus if you dont like trance dont waste your time reviewing it.
oh and why i submit a song every day, i dont, i resubmit sometimes, and i let my songs build up and i get 3 or four finished and i dont submit all at once because then fags will vote them all down, and i wont have a chance to escape them. and i DO go back and revise my songs, thus explaining this being a REMIX of one of my older songs... lol
thanks for reviewing, i dont even know what to think....
the only reason i even keep making music is to get comments from people, the best feeling in the world is when somone listens to one of YOUR songs and then tells you its awesome.
ive had alot of good reviews, and a few shit ones, but its just too hard to get noticed on newgrounds, half the people who review dont even respect what goes into making it or even KNOW how its done...
im going to keep making music, but im giving up on getting noticed