Not bad :)
I mean, to me personally. The ting ting ting hurt my ears a bit >< But the point was to use this library right? Anyways, a 7 because it's a pretty good mix of FF9, would of been nice to see a little more zing in originality. But it's kool in its own fashion. I really liked the drums.
Maybe you should whip out a sample library that isn't undead XD You definetely have talent.