This song is one of the reasons I don't like the audio portal on this site. The only reason I found this track is because you did a review on one of my own tracks. Some idiots on this site just like to randomly vote 0 on other people's music, and when a song gets a score of <4.00, it's almost impossible for others to discover it. If you made every part of this track by yourself, you are really talented, and have the potential to become a good musician. Like dejota said, the track needs more more structure. Also, try to think outside the box when it comes to beats, percussion and melodies. You don't have to use them like everyone else does. Try to be creative and you'll be fine. Sorry if you don't really get what I'm trying to say, I just hear some raw talent that I really would like to see being polished up. Keep it up!