Not bad at all
I don't want to sound too critical, because I did like it. :) Now that we got that out of the way....The background tune clashes with the main melody a bit and it annoyed me slightly. I didn't like your choice of instruments, I think you could have fumbled around a bit more and got something that sounded really awesome. It's all right there, spend some more time on it. And make it longer too.
Yea thanks! :)
As i said in the description : it was a spontaneus idea^^
And i didnt take that much time to create this tune, but i'll try to make a better one : D