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well now this song was awesome i really liked it!!!

Nice

Pretty good melodies man. The first one could use some alternates though.
Pretty nice side chaining also.

Obviously theres no real composition or transitions because it's a preview.

Mixing and mastering kinda sucks but I'm sure you'll fix that.

Drums are pretty lame but whatever lol

Good:

1) Melodies! :3 Could use some spicing up though.

Bad:

1) No real composition (obviously.)

2) Mixing is pretty crappy, song sounds kinda mushed.

3) Mastering is alright but the whole song needs to be more powerful in general.

4) Drum's are pretty lame lol

4/5 - Good song, we should collab on it :3

I like the melody

Sounds like it should be a good song. 10/10. 5/5.

Nice job on the mastering!

A few gropes though.
The mastering felt a little to compressed, like it needed some space.
I'd also give the drums a tiny bit more prominence. They feel kinda in the background. The beginning synth (honestly not sure if that's a bass or an backing synth) sounds too dry, I'd add a touch of reverb or delay.

But hey, as far as newgrounds techno goes this is pretty good. Just work the kinks out of the mastering and you've got a (hopefully) front page worthy song :D.

One last thing, this sound more dance than trance to me, but whatever.

Good luck!
-TriNova