The guitar tune is really nice....
The guitar tune is really nice, the only problem I have is that it sounds fruity loopish, and the percussion sounds stock, if you know what I mean. You should look at some new percussin samples. Also the guitar would sound a lot better if you used a real acoustic guitar.
www.breakbeat-paradise.com is a great website for percussion.
Overall though, you will be a very talented artist soon if you keep writing good music like this. You just need some better percussion is all.
Very well done my friend :D