Huh don't think I heard this one before. Awesome! It's your sis so I might be biased lol
Wow... kick ass
The start is amazing and builds up VERY nicely. Congratz.
I see what you meant when you wrote that my melody was similar to yours. Your song's much better though ^__^.
The only flaw I can point out is in the mastering. Certain instruments are just too loud and ruin the AMAZING build-up you made.
It seems like you used Slayer in fruity loops judging from the guitar's sound a UN-realism when it changes notes. The problem is that it is VERY overpowered and unwelcomingly covers the other amazing melodies you have.
Change just that and you have (imho) a masterpiece. I'd download it (or even buy it) any day ^__^.
Keep up the good work.
4.5/5 -> 5/5
Well, I know now that the synth is overpowering; when I made this I was using my laptop's speakers (they blow), and the lvl's got all thrown off when I played it on better speakers. If you think it's bad listening to it on NG, you should try it with a sub on a stereo, the bass is WAAAAY too loud as well lol. Of all the tracks I've submitted I thought this was the catchiest and worst produced... but it got the best grades... go figure...
It just screams Kuraiamino Mix by Rob Dougan, from the original Matrix
It is distinct and really cool - major props - love the simple and classic piano feel, it gives some nice depth... a little EQ work so the synth doesn't overpower the piano quite as much in the middle is my only suggestion...
just needs some better EQ and a little more variety in the piano.
like the way you made whole song around the piano
thats not easy to do
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.