Ahh, to feel reborn
I didn't hate the song, but I didn't like it. It has that newfound song pride and joy feeling that comes from an artist who's vaguely new.
However, you made the same mistake that I did, and that was having no bass. C'mon man, you gotta have bass up in here!
The song in itself was confusing, and after a while it got annoying. There was hardly and variety in the synths, the drums, or.. hell the composition. You had a couple of bridges here and there, and every once in a while you would cut out an annoying piece from the production, but all what it lead to was the same thing I've been hearing since the beginning. Nothing changes much, and that's the weak point in the song. Plus it's too long....
I can spot a few good points, like the way you arranged it, it's main pattern is chaotic, in a good way, and I'm sure that's what you were aiming for. Also the percussion's arrangement, though completely repetative and annoying, I did see an effort to mix things up a bit.
I'd have to rate this song as 5/10, 2/5 for mediocrity.The song is okay for someone who's learning. If you're not new, or have been doing this for 5 years, then you have no excuse for this. But if you are, keep trying and keep heading on, and go for the big money!
Think about it, when you progress you will notice that your old work gets worse and worse. As each new song is better and better.
Don't know... I think you should ease up on the phase effects etc it was a bit off time, but also I'm at another house with very bad speakers, when I get home I'll write another review if i think it's any better, that said it's probably not quite my style but it's definately not finished. I left the vote because this isn't my style...
I do know however that this wasn't made in 2 hours ;)
Not bad but seems like a lot of chaos, especially in the beginning. I can't really figure out the time signature and I don't like when that happens, especially in Trance music. Could use some string and a less of an aggressive synth. Also some bass would make this better. I'm giving you a 3 and 7, so keep up :)
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