greetings... i am the stalactites older brother :D:D:D
As has been said... this song requires alot.. improving the melody... adding harmonies, more rhythms, bass line, synth effects.... all of these additions can be made if you just try.
this sounds like a lazy attempt to be honest and i dont know why you chose to put it up. however you have had a little advice... ALSO, "vote zero for all i care"
that sounds like a potential musician with confidence issues.
To make confident effective music... requires a confident musician... perhaps you should have more faith in your abilities, and not dwell on your inabilities... with time and practice... you WILL improve... despite your pestimism...
KEEP AT IT! YOU COULD BE GREAT!
love stalagmite. :D:D:D
I'm a natural pessimist.
I always expect the worst.
Needs more elements,
but nice rythem, im sure if you used some more sounds, you'd get better scores.