You're trying to make techno, am I right? You've got the synths right, but the drum instruments that you used didn't fit the techno-feel to me towards the beginning. However, the beat is okay, but if you can change the instruments you used on the drums, I think that it would improve the quality of the song. Also, it needs just a tad more bass, but that's just my opinion. Other than that, the song isn't bad. Keep up the good work, I can tell that you're getting better with each song that you're making.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.