Even if I LOVE happy loops and catching ones,this one feels pretty empty to me,and it sounded like you had to repeat the beats just to make it longer,otherwise it would have lasted just half a minute.
-Quite a nice attempt
-The loop was booorriinnggggg as hell.
-Too many repetitions.
-The drums at the end just got it worse.
In my opinion,I'm sure you'll get better as you try new musics,Btw.
i think its a decent melody. Feels empty though.
Thanks for the seven.
A nice start-
I think the overall feel of the song is a bit too sparse for the melody you introduced at the beginning. I'd try introducing some new ideas and let the piece sizzle a little before you end it. At 0:52 you could introduce a lot of different things, such as a synth pad in the background, or more complex drums. Right now I think it ends too little too soon.
You're off to a good start, I'd take this idea and run with it!
5/5 for exposure
If you've got a minute I'd love your ideas on my latest piece ST Conflict!
Thanks for the eight.
I might just upload an updated version, who knows....
bip bop hip hop!
a nice theme, bit relaxing, just gotta put tones in between the lone gaps!
Ok, thanks for the review!
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