Good start... but
It would have been a good peice... if it had built into somthing more than just, say 1-2 steps above ambieance.
after a couple years, it's actually finally been picked up again. It's supposed to be an ambient song, so it's probbly going to stay that way, but a lot of stuff has been added lately. Maybe someday it'll actually get finish
it reminds me of one of my favorite psp games brave story new traveler. keep making more plz!!!!!!
Right now, this piece has that could be done with it. The beat gets very repepitive after a while of listening to it. What I think it might need is an added melody, perhaps using the piano. You were very sucessful in capturing that kind of peaceful setting and the melody (if added) should also fit the same tone. BUT like you said its a work in progress and im sure with a little but added here and there this song has a LOT of potential.
that repetive toon kinda gets on my nerves after a while sorry
A Truly Beautiful Piece
I hardly write music reviews because I am not really "born" into it. I admire music, like many others, but I do not have such an understanding so that I might form much valid and specific criticism.
With this piece, however, I do not need to worry about that, for I simply have no criticism to offer. Words have, for the most part, been taken away from me as a result of this. It speaks of peace and tranquility, and yet, there is more to it than just that (and it is THAT which I am unable to describe, which makes this song so awesome).
This is excellent work, and even though it is still technically a work in progress, I am still adding it to my favorites. Congratulations, and thank you both, for producing this.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.