Am I dead ?
I feel dead. This could go really well for something VERY psychedelic. But other than that, it just makes me feel dead. And the end is kinda cut so when the loop starts over, it makes a slight "click".
What exactly did you have on your mind when you made this? Dead bodies flying in a moebius strip while splashing black blood all around? That's what I see while listening to this.
Well, its very short but i suppose for a loop thats ok. It doesn't really flow that well in my view. In fact after listening to it a few times it kinda starts to hurt the ears. You have a decent bass idea for this but the pads your using are getting in the way of that. The acidized (what ever that instrument is) instrument is causing clipping. You need a lil more practice buddy. Keep up the music.
thank you for the constuctive critisism
Sounds a bit scratchy for my taste but it would be a good opening music for a main menu and considering you did this on a whim is also noted.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.