I loved the melody you have going in this song. However, the lead you are using isn't working for me. Maybe if you didn't use only quarter notes and whole notes and shake it up a little, it would be better. I love the background music that's goin on though. Top notch.
Hopefully ill have a Lange 8 up soon, and im going to look into that. im not completely sure I understand, but ill try "choppin and screwin" up the Saw. Thanks, Man. :)