You should try making that drum line swing as best you can, because i think that would actually give it a cooler feel. Anyway, the organ (?) kinda sound is pretty well done. It sounds like it has a bit of EQ, but it might need a bit more. That pick bass sounds pretty off-key to me, but it could be because i can't hear it all that well.
Good work! 9/10 and 5/5.
Hmm. Yeah, the pick bass might be just a liiiiittle bit off. But ah well. Hehe..
Thanks for the comment!