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Author Comments

We are Fight for Norman and a band of lads around 17yrs old. This is our first song recorded and we would like some honest feedback. Anyone who plays in a band and who have good suggestions on any aspect then your views will be gratefully accepted, thank you.

Tom

Reviews


Heavy, guys

The vocals are a bit too breathy (in the beginning) for me, but I love the overall heaviness that's just radiating off this song. Maybe a bit more of a bassline. I'm the lead lyricist and vocalist of a surf-rock band that I'm putting together.
I have two big-ish complaints. One: your singing style seems derivative. Two: your lyrics leave a lot to be desired. I mean, I know it's just a rock song, but they aren't really that good. You could play at a higher level with better lyrics.
Also, if you used an ostrich guitar (if you don't have a sitar or balalaika) for the acoustic part at around 4:00.
Hope I was helpful!
~the Crab


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Credits & Info

tomtytom
Author

Listens
370
Downloads
37
Votes
5
Score
4.10 / 5.00

Uploaded
Apr 10, 2009
7:14 PM EDT
Genre
General Rock
File Info
Song
5 MB
5 min 29 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.