cool dude :D
a) I really like your other song and hope you make more songs :D
b) the beggining is repetive and is almost the same as your other song.:D
J2A = Journey to Andromeda :P
This was submitted before and I wanted reviews to see what I should work on, it is the same song :) Thanks
This for a start had an excellent build up, and beginning trueTrance style your beat was nice high and clean it work well with the bubble quieter syth.
Then the main syth was good nice melody you kept a good beat throughout the piece.
Try to use more predominant beats, and change the tone and syth more.
Apart from that Great!
Yeah, I'm going to sort out the bass!
There are a lot of good things here. The track progressed well, and it had a steady beat to it. Good job with that!
Some of the levels of the instruments weren't especially well balanced- the bass was very hard to hear. I think you may be mixing on some unbalanced speakers, so try getting another set of speakers or a set of headphones to provide an alternate listening angle. One last point I had was there doesn't seem to be quite enough variation- I think you could benefit from adding in some more variety throughout the keep the listener's attention.
All in all a very good start, keep up the good work!
If you have a minute I'd love your thoughts on my latest track ST Conflict!
Thanks for the review, I'm trying to take in all of the advice given and it's sounding a lot better already! I will listen to your track and review, cheers!
I liked the intro especially the very start of the song
And after the intro the build to the actual song is cool
Everything in the piece seems like it needs more.
The intro part, it sounds like it should be more mysterious and unknown. It doesn't progress.
It needs a melody of some sort to stand out.
Arpeggios over and over get boring,
Totally agree, I've recreated the whole intro now, I'll be updating it soon. Thanks!
not bad at all
Intro needs to get my attention though. It was way too long. Generally people need to be attracted to your song in the first 15 seconds or so. The quicker you can catch someones ear, the better. Your song doesn't even really seem to pick up until some time after 1 minute. I would also recommend some more counter melodies and layers in general. Another thing. Your bass doesn't seem to come through enough. Try eqing the bass up. Hope this helps.
Cheers for the review dude.
I was kinda going for the long intro, I like it like that. I agree I do need to up the bass, that was coming through before, I must've fucked something up.
I'll try and sort it out, thanks! :)