Great idea, but it can get better!
Definitely A LOT better than the last one I reviewed, And you did a pretty good job at keeping the song Dynamical. i REALLY like what you're doing about 3:20, the standard techno/rave buildup of melody, What I'd like to see there though, instead of the really low clicking drum , is a really beefy, steady rising in volume snare drum. you are building up for the song climax, it has to be GRAND! the part leading up to the climax is just as important as the climax. Also in my opinion you need to introduce many more of the parts in the song with the gradual introduction of an instrument (with an animation clip controlling the volume and/or frequency), that way you can get really smooth transitions between the different parts and you don't have to worry about it sounding too stale at times (e.g .. okay.. adding instrument 1, .. instrument 2 .. instrument 3) , with gradual implementation those problems vanish. Also I would like to see a synth in the higher frequencies to play some sort of lead earlier in the song before the grand climax, because you have a really good solid Rhytm and good backing, nothing prevents you fromdrawng the listener in more.
Tweaking here and there with cuts/frequencychanges should be done as well, you've managed flawlessly wwith this at 3:30 and forward (the long introduced synth), i love the way you work it's frequencies and volume until the climax.
The climax too needs SOME more Unf .. like a drum or clap in the middle section of the frequency-range. You actually introduce it at 04:40, but I think it should be suited when the climax starts.
This is a cool song, really! you just need to bring out the last bit of dynamical potential to it
yes, definitely, i agree with you there, im gonna add another PAD
(if i can find 1)
in the qlimax buildup (From 3:30 - 3:57)
to make it more powerfull
and let it come back at 5:04(Or earlier) till the end
and i would also look to add a beefy snare in the qlimaxbuildup
and start the qlimax with indeed the claploop wich starts here at 4:40
and i saw i forgot adding a snare in the qlimax i see now :|
how damn stupid XD
But that would be no problem, fixed in no time.
About adding a lead in the intro, that is an amazing idea!
definitely gonna try it! (Maybe it would be cool to have a lead, in rly high frequency, so you can barely here it for example)
And ill see what i can do (more) with the frequency's later in the song.
Thnx again man!
Rly need this kind of reviews :D
Great bass, still could be alittle stronger and the treble synths need to be louder too. maby you could make wat i call the intro part shorter and make wat sounds like a new start up at about 3:40 sumwhere closer to the begging of the song, but that be just my opinion/taste though, merly suggesting though, it is YOUR song. ^_^
yes i know what you mean, its in progress right now, so it shouldnt be too long from now to finnish ^-^
and i also know people dont like rly rly long tracks.. but thats just like, like awe..
i like almost al sorts of electronic music, like Deadmau5, his work is very moving but still very simple you kno, he makes his tracks for about 4:00 to 10:00 minutes long, anyways. it doesnt matter XD
ill see what i can do about the intro, and put op an outro aswell to complete the song ^-^
Thnx for the review man!
very good i enjoyd the build up and the transitions were fantastic deff gonna dl this 10/10
thnx for the review dude, glad you liked it ^^ [ So do i(A) ]