Better than your other rendition,
I rated your other version a 4/10 (2/5) as that one seemed tinny and barely up to snuff with the original (also it couldn't be considered as orchestral) but this one hits all the right buttons. Well done.
The "Original" you mentioned isn't quite the reworking you think it is. If you listen closely, you'll realize the instruments are meant to be the same, but the chord progression on all instruments is altered dramatically. Listen closely to both and tell me I'm wrong via inbox if you think my statement is false.
Great job Tr4nc3r!