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God I love Awoken. And this doesn't really do it justice. But you worked with what you had at your disposal, so I can't hate on ya for that too much. ;-)
Overall, well I don't know. I love Heaven Shall Burn, A LOT! So, yea, doesn't really do it for me. I personally don't think covering metal bands is a good idea, unless you are making a different form of metal.
There just really needs to be some guitars in this to make it up to par. At least for my taste. I know you don't exactly have those capabilities, but all the same. You win some, and you lose some.
But I'll give ya a decent score for putting forth the effort. I just can't give you a great score.
3/5 and 5/10 overall.
-Gravey-