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Apr 8, 2009 | 4:13 PM EDT
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2.9 MB
3 min 9 sec
4.11 / 5.00

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Rated 4.11 / 5 stars
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Author Comments

Just playing around with the old elctro acoustic, the track is nothing special at all, just messing around with picks and stuff, a few effects are used, mainly some nice reverbs and a nice rhytmic delay, im looking to add strings to the track on the second verse however i have no midi as of yet, hopefully i can turn this into a stonker eh. Comments are of course always welcome.




Rated 4 / 5 stars

Incomplete sensation to my cerebellum~

I am by no means an expert, nor have I studied music.

I love the song and thought of a few things to clean it up/make it more enjoyable to the listener from an outside opinion. :]

Constructive criticism, you can decide whether it's useful or not.

The gap around 1:16 disrupts the flow of this song, which I'd say is crucial considering it's an acoustic song (i.e. no other sounds; which brings me to the next point).

Although you commented on strings, nearly any longer 'bar' sample would do. The acoustic helps muchly with tugging on emotions but an aspect of building to a moment would help the song a lot me thinks.


pitbulljones responds:

3 years later heck, i respond..........sorry.

thank you for the more than excellently critiqued review. klove the feedback


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

love it :O!

amazing (: I played this over and over again for like 2 hours [:

pitbulljones responds:

two and a half years later....i reply,

Thank you. i'm glad you enjoyed it :)

peace and hugs.