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Apr 8, 2009 | 8:51 AM EDT
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1.8 MB
47 sec
4.13 / 5.00

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Rated 4.13 / 5 stars
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Have no mercy for newbie...Let me know what u think plz



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

way to go!

I lke it all the way(even if it short).It's just repetitive...but it's not so important because you make a great work.
5/5 and 9/10 for this audio.
Now,I will ask you a job...Just ROCK this place!!! LOL!
seriously,continue like that.

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Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

It's great...

but I do have one issue with it (hence the 9/10)... It's repetitive.

You can make it sound a lot better with really minimal effort, actually. There's a lot of great things happening in here, including effects, balance, mastering, and atmosphere. It would flow really nicely, too - if it wasn't quite as repetitive. But as I said, that can be fixed very easily.

Here's how:
You only seem to have one chord going right now. Thus nothing ever moves around. So all you have to do is add an occasional chord change. I would recommend that you try moving it up on the first bar of a set of four bars during the section with the guitar. But don't feel restricted by that: experiment and see what sounds good to you.

The only other thing is the fact that there's a bit of a bump in the loop. It would help if you faded the instruments so they don't cut out so abruptly at the end.

All the same, nice work. Love the atmosphere of this one. 5/5, 9/10.

Power to you, TWojnar!

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TWojnar responds:

Thnx for advise:D
The "Valley" was my first thing i made using just comp... I changed it a bit & used in my 4th project which is still in garage.