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Apr 7, 2009 | 8:42 PM EDT
File Info
2.4 MB
2 min 8 sec
3.10 / 5.00

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Rated 3.10 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
442 Plays | 51 Downloads
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Hip Hop, Rap, R&B - Hip Hop - Modern

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Rated 3 / 5 stars


i completly agree with l0vemetal with the decisions you do need more bass an up the tempo as usually hip hop songs are faster also it will make a more energetic feel where as currently it feels slow and has a lack of energy so good work keep working on it but im rating it as it currently is when u have an updated version i will listen too how much you have improved it that is only if you are going to update it,which in my personal oppinion would be a great idea as it can be extremly good.


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars


Keep in mind this is just creative criticism, not bashing you by any means.

It was okay for a 'hip hop' song, given the complete lack of a bassline. Try to mix the drumline up a bit as well. The piano has a nice potential, but as it stands it's way too basic and slow. Try throwing at least something in there to shake things up... also, at the very least throw some heavy bass hits into the the mix. I mean, it IS a hip hop song apparently. The song has potential, but as it stands now, even imagining it with vocals it remains too slow, lifeless, and basic.

Good job, though. Brush it up and you'll have a winner. :-) Though I rated it a 7, I gave you a 4 as I'd like to see you take the blanket off this track and give us something completely wonderful.