The Beginning was an epic one, though the bass might have been a little too loud and distorted, it jumbled the rest of the sounds and kind of made it sound stressed.
Nice melody, try using a bassdrum to it, rather than a distorted kick, its so powerful it sounds Sidechained, but in a bad way. Otherwise, this is wicked sick man.
Also, try a name change and more lower pitched rhythm and sound. (Rhythm as in Octave and Sound as in, not the commonly used Saw, but more of a layered sound of different sorts.)
Good luck man, I am looking forward to seeing this become a good well known epic song.
thx for your uplifting bro, i'll be working on it...
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the perc you threw behind the saw, its all wrong. for the good of your song, throw it out :)
id switch to a faster pattern after a small breakdown, and deeply reconsider all percussion placed in the song
the perc? u mean the crash? the hat? the kick? the pad thingy?