its not the best,
you seem like you already know what you want to change.
but please fix the noise at 50 secs haaha
...BUUUUUT i prolly won't get around to it. Thanks anyways!
Not bad for just messing around, I must say.
But if you think it sucked so bad, why did you post it?
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