The "Kicks" You Are Using Aren't That Nice Though :\
The Melody Your Working With Is A Common Trance Melody.
Whcih Is Ok.
The Strings You Added Add A Little "Umph" To It.. Good.
All In All, I'd Say 8/10
I dont know why but the sound sucks a bit on this record. It's completly different form the real version that is on my sequencer. I recorded it with audacity from my keyboard on line imput. I'll do it with a better program ( as fl studio on cubase ) and i'll repost it. I know the kick sounds as a dick in this recording... But in real i love it ;)
So i'll try do do another part of it and i'll repost it the fastet than i can
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.