To me, your song really expresses that you are thinking of someone....maybe, no quite definitely someone that you have lost along the way....and you are walking, I see you walking down a dirt road...with the clouds rolling through the sky, but a distant ray of light shining down to get you through your despair. Peace to you....this is a great composition for under 2 minutes. You should feel a sense of pride...I 'm sure the person you dedicated this to thinks so, too. No, not a 5, a 5 plus 10.
thanks i put alot into this.