The organs are a lil overbearing
They make the rest of the mix hard to hear, including the lyrics, which should probably be the most audible part of any mix, at least imho.
When the guitar came in, I could barely hear it.
Personally, I would have used a piano instead of an organ in order to avoid this problem completely, but it feels like the organ is an integral part of your composition, so I just recommend that you turn the volume of the organ down.
The mixing isn't all that great on this song. But the chords and the melodies are all pretty good.
Sorry for the score, I really am, cuz I hate to give out scores lower than 7 cuz I know how much it hurts to recieve stuff like that, but I can only give this a 6.8 at the most when everything is wrapped together.
However, I will say that the emotion of this track is unique, that's pretty awesome if I say so myself.
Also, kudos for a 7 minute composition. I'd imagine that took ages to do. And the lyrics are pretty good too, Deanna has a nice voice.
I want to go over this song in the future when I'm better on the production side - I consider myself more of a writer than a producer - of music, I'll keep this in mind.
The reason the organ was so much louder - and the reason I used an organ in the first place - was because according to the story told, the organ's really the only thing instrument that's actually there, seeing as it starts off and ends at a funeral.
Once again, Thanks ^_^
I always like the audio portal because every so often, I find beautiful music like this, and it's difficult to please me music-wise, lots of the time I just stamp 0 on it, but this one deserves full points, simply because I like it very much, good job.
oO thankyou ^_^
i really enjoyed this song has a nice melidy to it..im not sure if you were trying for the ghost effect with the vocals or not but i think they need to be turned up for in certin parts of the song if i had not had the lyrics provided to me i would not have been able to tell what she was signing
Point noted. I'll go through it and raise the volume later today while I'm up at dad's house.
EDIT: done it :P