The melody is too pseudo-baroque/early classical. It needs more variance in the modes and the chord progressions you use , as well as the orchestration. The melody is mostly in upper registers and mid-range, and the counter-point in the bass isn't strong enough to support it. Also, check the chord at 0:30. Moving block chords aren't usually a good idea unless they are spread out in the bass parts (10ths with tonic as bass work real nice!).
A mysterious piece which could be in certain scenarios. Kind of like a Harry Potter style.
The music built up very nicely and like your other is really calming to listen to.
Did you actually do it?
Hey, did you actually write all the songs that you did? Cuase they're really good.
of course i did!
you can't submit other people's work, otherwise your account gets deleted.
But, thank you for the comment :)