Not much to say here. Sounds like you have the start of a song, but you really need to expand on it. That synth is kinda cool sounding but it would sound a lot better if it built up and progressed as the song went on. Also I would change the hihats at the beginning. The eighth note closed hihat doesn't really fit into a trance song. I wish i could give you more advice, but I don't listen to much trance myself. The main thing I would say is expand on your ideas and build up a whole song instead of a short loop. Keep working on it and you'll get better before you know it!
yeah the hats I totally forgot about it
I think that's my problem, I cant progress, i don't know how to change it up (i might be because i use FL studio)