I don't like Odd numbers, so I gave the 8...
instead of 7 lol.
The drum loops were kind of random and... well, not very easy to do any type of moving or dancing to. So that could be fixed :)
The over all sounds are very... well, all over the place and it's kind of difficult to pick out any main defining Melody and Harmony. Though I can hear from the background synth what it is supposed to sound like, it is hard to pick it out from the other synth being used. So a more defined Melody and Harmony would be nice, and maybe ((I know from seeing other comments that you already did)) But maybe add a STRONGER bass, and a more ((As I keep saying)) Defined bass line, instead of a like 190 BPM kick drum in there ye?
Not horrible :D Definitely better than my first songs lol
Thats a lil better
But.... wheres the bass this song was ruined becuz of that so do it over with bass.
there i did it with bass
It was pretty good, my suggestion would be to throw in some heavy bass, and fix the drums.
thx for the review,
unfortunatly, most of my drums wont give off a sound, so i have to wait untill i get another coppy of the program to fix the problem.