im sorry this is not hip hop at all... its like cheesy dance music, and when i say that you took a really cool song and made it in the view of lame little crackers go bang on fruity loops to try to replacate the awsome. haha Cheese and crackers. xD i didnt like it, i seems out of sync and theres like no pads or movement. like you grabed a midi and slaped nexus presets on it said " SONG! " i say its no good.
the notes are wrong :P i like the beats though