Lonely Ocean (Wave I)

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Writen as a musical sleeping pill.


My review, your song.

Opens on a nice pad, bit white noisy (I guess like waves/ocean as the title suggests).

0:40 same thing continues.

0:50 major key happyness / same thing continues.

1:37 I'm hearing crackling thats not white noise. Unsure if its the song, it seems to play unevenly. I checked my audio ouputs and whatnot, and music I play from FL, or WMP is crackless. I'm assuming the mix might be making my headphones play something funny, but it may just be an issue on my side.

2:00-ish drum comes in a bit and leaves a bit before 2:40. It should have lasted longer frankly.

5:15 and on, just water noise.

To summarise my feelings;

The water was ok in the intro, good for the solo outro. While ambient music is flowy and generally more simple then that of other music, you should include a bassline that too plays a simple slow rythm, even if its stretched over the course of several bars of music. Keep it non-obstructive of course.

This song was a series of chords of synth strings all playing together on beat. Accompaniment would have made this go from a generic ambient piece to a nicely syncopated composition boasting both smooth easy listening, and well written music. Something like a flute I think would work.

Needs some filling out, and drop the ocean sound midway through when you have more instruments playing the rest of the song.

3/5 7/10

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NightcoreVII responds:

That crackling your hearing must be the song. I forgot to run it through Maximus... oops. I'll definitely add some more drums to any future ambient music I make, as well as a nice lead. =) And once again, Thank You!


great job, this is a real music ambient,

i would like, you were increasing the volume of the drums i heart, just that.

but everything is good!!!

NightcoreVII responds:

I appreciate the review =)


Awesome ambient work, dude!

NightcoreVII responds:

Hey thanks =)

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4.03 / 5.00

Mar 31, 2009
3:37 PM EDT
File Info
7 MB
6 min 6 sec

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