Its good, but has a couple problems:
1) its short, BUT thats really what the original was; around 40 second repeating anthem
2) it REALLY lacks in boldness and well standing out for that matter. This version is quiet and could have had some things added in. Maybe flute other instruments for a different version?
..Though im sad to find out this one is really the only non techno/trance/dance/ect version of the song...
I know I'm responding a little late, but if you want, I can make a good arranged version of it, since I made this when I only had a piano program :)