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Tossed this together recently. No drums yet.

EDIT: If yer kind enough to review, please say what sucks about it (other than genre/etc I guess?).
Nice reviews are cool and all, but I'm interested in improvement first.

EDIT EDIT: It's been suggested that another verse after that weird bridge singing bit could tie the song together better. Yes/no?


Cool song but...

Sounds a bit "The Libertine's"ish which, if thats what your going for, you've done pretty well.
- Add drums. I realise thats not a very useful piece of advice lol but i think me and you both know they would work well here regardless of what other reviewers have said.
- If you don't want to add drums, take any distortion or overdrive off of that guitar and turn the volume down. Even if you do add drums, still the guitar volume down.
- Like the vocals but add some reverb, to them and mess around with them a bit. Stand a bit further from the microphone.
- If you add drums, make sure you add a good catchy bassline.

I've done and do some pretty similar stuff to this kind of music and i do kind of know what im talking about, im not just an a-hole. Its a really good song though mate, its just you asked for ideas to improve and i listed a few.


great, just great, very good evrything....cept vocals, w/ a little better vocals this could be featured

Very nice Guitar!

But you should only submit the guitar tracks alone for placements, and master the vocals later on down the road with better recording. Nice lyrics, but bad recorded vocals! I just love your Guitar work!!!! you should repost just your Guitar track, and watch the comments on it! Youl be amazed, because I know its good stuff!!! Good job fellow Musician!!!!!

Strepitoso responds:

Thanks mate, I realize singing isn't my strong point, but that's exactly why I'm doing it. Best way to get better is to suck a few times and figure out why, I find.

Edit: As I said, looking to improve, not bait for glowing comments :)

sunday over easy

I think this sounds really pretty, it has a really nice tune to it. I don't think you should add drums, I think it's just right with the guitar/vocals.

As far as improvement goes -- the vocals are a little bit inconsistent in the volume and harmonizing department. Also, I'm not sure how I feel about the usage of the word "infantile," but it's really the only word that works and make sense/rhymes.

You have a nice voice, keep it up!

Strepitoso responds:

Yeah, that was definitely reaching far as lyrics go. My recording setup is a bit, ehm, shitty at the moment - I'll see what I can do to even out the vocals.

Edit: Thank you very much, by the way - my voice is one thing that terrifies me from a musical standpoint, haha.


Reminds me a lot of a spanish rock song called "Mi Primer Dia Sin Ti"
Meh, I like it...

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Credits & Info


3.93 / 5.00

Mar 30, 2009
5:21 PM EDT
File Info
2.7 MB
2 min 59 sec

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.