I love the slow tempo and the chords,Kinda reminds me of THE MATRIX sub strings. However, I would add SUB TRACTOR bass line chops under the strings, and maybey some guitar distortion on the climb. DAMN GOOD START! Just fill it in some more, and expirment with sub bass sounds, such as real basey winds, or explosions. Nice job!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.