hard for me to say anything for 8 seconds of music. However. hmm.. It starts out like it has potential but the synth used at the end kinda takes away what there is in it. I'd say work on it more finish it and post it.
Keep on the music.
I'm in a positive mood so be happy :]
It's a good start and i like it so far.
But please Complete it before you post another one..
Neutral 5 for you.