Not bad.

the blips around the 2:55 marker get old pretty fast but would probably do a lot better with an actual melody, which even then you could repeat every few bars and have it ease off a lot. I imagine the blips were meant to break up the rest of the song and add some variety, and they do, but not without being the low point of the entire piece.

Until then and once they go away, though, the composition is fairly solid and has kept me listening now at least two times through. Good job. : )

heh

If only you would redo it as trance I would download it.