well, it seems to go around a simple melody pretty much the whole time, so it gets kinda repetative. also, it sounds like an arpeggio is used for a lot of the instruments too. and also some default instruments. and finally, some transitions would be good between the parts of the song.
theres just some pointers. i hope that helps you ;)
Thanks for the constructive critisim.
I make my songs bit by bit, So I dont know any shortcuts and such. So it makes it hard for me to configure what to do. After I make a song I think about things that would make it sound better but, I can never find the right sound to make it perfect lol
I use fl studio, I just figured out a little bit one day. I know you can do pretty much anything with that program. Figuring it out on your own is the hard part though lol