I dig it.
I liked this, it seemed like I'd be an interlude track between songs.
Mello rhodes and the chill beat. The sounds that start at 10-11 seconds could have been a bit quieter, but I like how they sound. My only complaint could be the thunder sounds, just cause I've heard that in so many tracks, it has become kind of a cliché.
Nice, it was a little smooth not too interesting, but that's good for certain things, I liked it :J
I respect the feel your trying to achieve, but you need to change it up a bit more.. Continues on one path and ends abruptly. Adding some slight back ground effects more often that are less loopy would make it sounds much better.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.