I got what I clicked for
The bass is definitely there. I can hear it fine, but I listened to the original beforehand. Certain places, the bass stands out more than it does in other places. In opposite situations, the bass can't be heard at all, and that's where a problem comes. Besides the bass, my only complaint is around 1:31 the instrument chosen does not go down 2 steps. I know it's a rock remix, but that decent has to happen. Again, knowing it's rock, the instruments seem logically picked, not that I'm 100% confident in figuring out which they are. Perhaps more contrast so I'm not constantly hearing what I think are two guitars and a drum set. I think it's a good piece, clearly labeled, but could do with some work.
It's Just Not There Yet
Here's my score:
Instrument Blend--- 0/1
Clear Concept ------- 1/1
The bass wasn't defined enough. I'm not sure if that could've been fixed with a change of instrument, but the instrument choice certainly didn't help.
I think you got the melody; I'm just not sure about the bass line is all.
This was pretty clear cut rainbow road rock remix.
I'm still not getting a sense of the artist through this piece. It's just a switch to "rock," not really anything I haven't heard before.
I know it's especially hard with songs we love so much--we just don't want to mess around with the melody because it's already so good! But changing the melody isn't the only way to put yourself in a piece of music. Change in beat, moderation of volume, tempos... these are all tools in which to create something Mind Boggling. I'm sorry, but I just didn't get that from this one.
It seemed like you got the melody, but I couldn't very easily decide what key it was in. Sorry :S
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