This is a work in progress for one of our DnB song. We still feel unsatisfied by the song, but we don't want to give up on it. Please give us some points of improvement if you find any. This song was made in FL studios and then slightly edited in Sony Vegas. Please vote and review fairly.
Want the latest updates? Follow us on Twitter at http://www.twitter.com/vn studios
~VNSTUDIOS
The intro's real phat
but it sounds really messy/muddy when the piano and drums come in.
also why is the piano so off-beat? just let it stay on beat, don't get "creative" with it.
it needs a rushier drumnbass loop as well, the loop right now sounds so gay.
Unfortunateley, we had to reformat the computer that contained the file, so we won't be able to change anything to this song. Like I said to the other comment, those weren't loops. It was only a work in progress as well. However, I would like to thank you for your review. We learned alot of tips from these reviews.
hmm.
first of all, and this is IMPORTANT: in the beginning there's an organ synth, and a piano, well... the piano is off time, the organ is doing something and the piano is doing something else
and everything from then on is off time
it sounds to me like you grabbed a bunch of loops and stuck them together without beatmatching...
sorry, not my cup of tea.
next time? Make your own sounds! start off with a drumkit and go into piano roll and have some fun, then throw more things together, and some effects.
loops can be deadly if you dont know how to beatmatch.
None of this was made with loops. I found many different soundfonts, used some Sytrus,3xosc,TS404, and some other VSTs I found on the internet. I pianoroll to make the melodies and then play around with the effects on the mixer. To me, the sounds seemed to correspond fine, but I'm not any music expert so I could be wrong. Like I said in the author comments, it's only a work in progress (we might actually never finish it). Anyway, I would like to thank you for your honest review. Maybe one day we can improve this song.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
VNStudios 
![38 (Red Wednesday) [Alternate Demo]](https://aicon.ngfiles.com/1314/1314414_medium.webp?f1713261572)