Did you accidentally submit it to the DNB section or something? This isn't DNB.
Drum and bass is typically from 170 BPM to about 200. This sounded like it was at 80-90. Not good.
So yeah, it wasn't really drum and bass at all. Although it had a nice beat, and the synths were very nice. I liked the other elements you built into it but it was a very anti climatic piece. It stayed the same sort of speed all the way though, there were no build ups and it was very repetitive. The drums could have done with some mixing, the snare was very bland.
Overall it was OK, try submitting it to the right section next time.
Yea this is very quite slow (120 bpm) so it doesnt go in the DnB subgenre but i didnt want to put it to miscellanous either.
Also these (including this one) are there first songs/tracks i have EVER made in a multimedia studio so theyre not very good as everyone can assume.
Nevertheless, thanks for the review...
wouldve been really cool if it built up to a fast climactic part or something.
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