after reviewing your last song, i checked back today. and to my surprise you actually responded. so i decided to take the time and check into the rest of your music. after all, one song does not make an artist, where one song lacks another could prosper. and i actually really enjoyed this song. onto the review. expect me to review all if not most of your songs. :D
the intro was a little sketchy when it was one guitar by itself. but it fixed itself as soon as the lead came in. really awesome melodies, like seriously sick melodies man. and the choir was nice. i liked when you scaled over the choir without any drums. that was very nice. i don't even see any eq problems in this song either. it has a very great flow and harmony. the piano bit was awesome as well. the one part i didn't like was the transition from the intro when it was the bass and the leads. i don't know why, but that part only lasted for a little bit anyways. i think its because its like, you picked me up with the fast intro and then dropped me with the slow lead and bass riff. then picked me back up again. i normally would try to suggest a solution, but i cant think of any.
all in all, for a starting out song its superb, and even if it wasn't a starting out song. then its still superb, and superior to most video game songs. but this is an original. which is awesome. keep it up. and expect me to review again and again.