THE GUY BELLOW!
THAT GUY BELLOW ME SUX! HE DOESN'T HAVE ANY TASTE IN MUSIC!
Around 25-40 seconds, the music really went downhill for me. May be you should try experimenting with some other instrument or sound. The guitar part was good, don't change it. Thats just my opinion though, good luck!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.