you need to get one thing right
and that's the mainmelody, be sure to use the same keytone for the bass and the mainmelody or else it sounds completely off.
And the synths in FL isn't that great if you don't do some serious mastering to it, i suggest you download the vst "nexus" and all the expansions for it.
good luck in the future :)
kk thx man ofcourse thx for the suggestions i know it went into a different tone i before i submitted it i felt that to it went in one direction then took a SHAPR right T_T ill do my best to fix it and thx for the suggestions also do u gotta pay? XD remember ima a noob actually i would like to continue this ill PM u :P