15 minutes?
no way... that seems way too short.
I love the mood this sets, uncomfortable, yet relaxing, nothing too overpowering, yet listenable as a song, very well balanced.
I do really like this, and as far as what it's trying to acheive i think its close enough to perfect.
Erm, I'll try and put something to improve on, just so this review isn't just a waste of time.
I guess my only thing to say is to try and elicit a certain emotion in your music, rather than just having a song, make it tell a story (as cheesey and ridiculous as it sounds). Thanks for submitting, i really enjoyed this.