i think your accent is a little appaling. BUT you have the balls.
also, although stereo types are funny. fish n chips... bread and beer. LOL. they are not portrayed so well as to be amusing.
firstly. for animators to work with. try popping in some amusing material. dont be afraid to add sfx too. some interesting appropriate backing music would be nice.
2nd. your voices are to much the same. try changing pitch... add an impediment perhaps... make it more gravelly, squeaky, deeper, croakier, louder? so many alternative variations to effect the voice. the voices need to be different to establish which character is which. also try adding more emotion. it would be funnier if he got heavily frustrated.
Lastly. just practice. practice makes perfect. try to appeal more to your target audience. i have not checked out your other sketches. but i will now.
tyhanks for this. and please VALUE the advice i give. do not be offended. i am helping. :D:D:D despite not being so appealing to ME, i will give it 10. because it takes Cahonies! lol.
Thank you very much ! That was not offending at all IMO, any criticism can be constructive criticism, thank you. I didn't try my hardest on this one, and I guess, I haven't been putting the necessary time into this to make it truly great. My next ones are just going to have to be much better ! Thank you very much, it means alot to have feedback, there's always room for improvement.
Very poor English accent, get me a wort-er?
At least you tried so I gave a 3, this kind of made me cringe for you though :(
Hey, thank you for your review. I'd like to say for the record, that this is hands down my worst clip I feel. I didn't like it, I didn't like the script, but I was in a time rush and I wanted to submit something showing off my accents and works.
Sorry you didn't like the accent, I feel it's a fairly decent accent, but it was rushed. Hope you enjoy some of my other clips, other than that, have a good day !
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.